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PostSubject: Jaffe, 'Pain'   Fri Mar 05, 2010 4:39 pm

Name: Jaffe. No one knows this name so he is just called Pain.
Alias/Nicknames: Pain.

Age: 1337
Visual Age: 17

Doll's Name: Ningyō Sensei (Master of Puppets.)
Leader of Organisation XI: Applying for the leader.
Personality: Jaffe has two personalities, Jaffe & Pain.

Nagato was a sensitive but kind boy, prone to crying, and was traumatized by the idea of killing others, even to save his friend. Scared and unsure of his place in the world, he desired to help those he cared about, but never knew how. Nevertheless, he was a talented and gifted child, mastering every single thing that some persons had taught him. He was consistently respectful and kind to Sofia, who he claimed to be his "angel" in his home town. He was shown protecting her, without request or hesitation, from bulliers, before his battle with his former teacher. Apparently, she was the only one that Pain, or Jaffe, respected.

As Pain, his personality was very different, having become a calm, serious, aloof, and detached man. Apparently believing traumas he experienced in his youth had enlightened him to the true meaning of pain and suffering, he considered himself a deity, and believed he had evolved beyond a mere human being. He sought to show the world the meaning of pain by using an ultimate weapon to deter future wars, by means similar to "mutually assured destruction", and showed no moral qualms about his actions. He even went so far as to proclaim himself a "god of peace", that had to guide the world to maturity through pain. Finally, he felt that no-one could understand true peace unless they understood "true" pain, something his childhood friend, Yakamoto believed.

Nonetheless, he was seen to be quite respectful, particularly to the fallen and the dead. Given his friends frequent bickering, he often restrained them, and encouraged better relations among friends. He even suggested that they mourn for Takimoto after his passing, and reprimanded Kaizu for calling Hikaro and Kaku the "Zombie Brothers". They were two persons that were wanting to kill and they were easily annoyed. After his battle with his teacher, he held a moment of silence for his former teacher, out of respect for his power.

Birthday: 6.6
Birthplace: Unknown.
Natural Race: Human.
Family/Relatives: Friends alive, family unknown. They left Pain when he were child.

-Noisy people
-Annoying people.

None actually.

Favorite Food:

Favorite Music:

Forte in Sports:
-King of the hill. (:3)
-Capture & Conquer.
Special Skill:
-He has a talent to use weapons that are black as night, that can drink your spiritual energy, away, when they are in your body. They also give boost the dolls ability.
-He also seems to have pretty good contact with another Bounts.
Height: 189 Cm.
Weight: 61 Kg.
Blood Type: A.
Reproduce: Didnt get this. If this means that he can make childs with girls then hell yeah. Very Happy
Story: During the Second Great War, in his country, Pain, or Jaffe, lived with his parents in a village near his home. One day two enemy soldiers broke into their home looking for food, unaware that the place was still inhabited. Jaffe's parents, believing they were going to be killed, attacked the two so that Jaffe could escape. Having mistaken them to be enemy ninja, the soldiers killed his parents. He would come to consider this incident the first great pain of his life.

His family gone, Jaffe wandered the country, going from house to house asking for food. In time he met a dog named Peep and later, Takimoto and Yakimoto, who began traveling with him in his search for food. One day, Peep was killed in the crossfire from teachers's fight with the soon to be new country leader. Jaffe mourned his death and promised himself that he would change the world. Soon afterwards the war ended, and the three orphans ran to the country. Rather than return to his country with his 'teammates', his new teacher decided to teach the three how to look after themselves.

The Orphans after completing Teacher's training.

Soon after Teacher began living with the orphans, Takimoto and Yakimoto were attacked by an soldier. In a blink of an eye, Jaffe killed the soldier.. With somekind of monster. When their teacher found out about this, he decided to train them in combat. Jaffe was very emotional about killing the soldier, and asked Teacher for help so he could protect Takimoto and Yakimoto. Teacher's response was for Jaffe to grow up and to use his own eyes to find the peace that they both desired for the world. Three years later the orphans had become competent tools of war, so their Teacher returned to where he had came here.

Over the years, news of the three's exploits would reach the Teacher. This often consisted of the death of someone who opposed them; eventually he received word that they had all died. In truth, Jaffe, or Pain, as he were called now, Takimoto, and Yakamoto began a quest to find peace. They became full-fledged 'Soldiers of Peace' and gathered followers who shared their philosophies of an end to war. The leader of Country, Han, viewed the group as a threat to his position as leader and schemed with Country's Foundation to eliminate them. Claiming to want to discuss peace, Han lured Takimoto, Yakamoto, and Pain to an ambush. There he forced Pain to choose between killing Yakamoto or Takimoto. Not wanting to force Pain to make the choice, Yakamoto impaled himself with a kunai that was placed in Pain's hand. With Yakamoto's dying breath, he told Pain to survive, because he believed in their Teacher's words that Pain would become the world's savior. This would become the second great pain of Jaffe's life.

Devastated, Jaffe retrieved Takimoto and Yakamoto's body and launched an attack against Han's men. With the doll, he was able to kill all but Han. However, the doll left many scars in the countrys history. Buildings destroyed, people killed & blood everywhere.

Upon adopting the alias "Pain", Jaffe led the rebelling forces in the country civil war, and took control of the village by assassinating Han. He then solidified his leadership by systematically killing anyone who had direct ties to the former leader. He left the country when another countries were coming for his head.

Fighting Style: Doll, Weaponry & Fists / Feets.
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PostSubject: Re: Jaffe, 'Pain'   Sat Mar 06, 2010 1:16 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Jaffe, 'Pain'   Sun Mar 07, 2010 9:09 am

This is from TNRPG site.

He had brought the Feitans body to his camp. He hided it well and would continue the puppet when he had sometime. He went to the body. He thought what he could do to it to make it more powerful. He actually knew what to do. He took a sharp stone from the ground. He went to make it sharper and making it to form of a knife. He made the items that he needed to make a puppet from Feitan. He left them on the table. He had been doing those items for seven or ten hours now, and they were master pieces. Sanmaru went to sleep. He wanted only to rest now...

Creating his first puppet: Feitan, or actually Taka. (Hawk)

Part 1, Making the dead body alive.

Sanmaru woke up after finishing his Katon training. (What is still in progress -.-') The sun were shining, there were a little clouds on the sky. The day were beautiful. It were a special day to Amegakure. Normally there is a rain in amegakure so these days are rarely. Sanmaru step out of his tent, eating a sandvich. Yawn. Sanmaru were tired as hell. He have been doing such many things in a week. But he cant give up. He must continue. (Thriller Start!) Sanmaru had finished his sandvich. He ran a little lap, something about six kilometres. He went to swim, only for a little while. He did stink before that.. And he will stink again. It will not be very clean week. Sanmaru would have to do a Marionet.. From his old "Friend's" body. Sanmaru drink a cup of water, after finishing that, Sanmaru went to the body. He had to make the puppet able to use chakra. Of course, its able to use chakra even without Sanmarus help, but with help of Sanmaru, it would be able to use more Chakra. This was maybe the hardest way, because he had harmed him in the fight pretty badly. He opened the chest of Feitan. He put his right hand in, trying to make a chakra source inside of Feitan. He used over half of his chakra. Something around 60-70 percents. It were hard, but it were not over. Sanmaru would have to took all of the organs out from his body and make it a weapon. It werent something that kid would watch. Sanmarus hands were already bloody, all around. He were grinning little evily. He took the heart off. Carefully. It were beautiful organism. Sanmaru had cut the organisms around it carefully off. Sanmaru moved the heart out from his way, and the chakra that were around the body, started to gather into the place that Sanmaru were pointing. He had been doing this for a while already. This were his way to make the puppet able to generate chakra and so on. He needed much more chakra so this would not be a one day job. He generated 50% of chakra he had put inside of Feitans dead body into the chest, causing it to be reflexible and able to generate chakra to that area. He cut all of the organisms off. He took his hand off from Feitans body. He started to think, what he should do to that part. He got one idea. He made the body so that Sanmaru would be able to add anything, anytime he would want. He had avoid the bones infront of organisms and now he knew what he would do. He breaked all of them. He put them aside. He would make weapons from those. He would make a doll from human body so the bones werent needed. He went to the outside and cutted few trees down. It took a little time but now he would be able to do knees and so on. Sanmaru went to the body, took the bones, made them sharper, almost like kunais. He took the smaller knife from the table. The blade of it were only about 5mm wide and were good for joints. Sanmaru made little wooden balls to be in the place of joints. They would make the fingers, and everything to move like a doll. He put them into the joint points of hand first. When he had done that, he took wire from the table and sew the parts together. He sew the chest too. The finger were fully reflexive now. Sanmaru grinned evily, knowing that this puppet would work, actually. He made the another fingers too. He made hidden weapon on the finger tips. He put small, senbon like bones on them. The puppet would be able to grab everything easily. They were 3-4 cm long, as long as the first part from finger. It made the puppet able to move his fingers as Sanmaru just wanted. He also wanted to add few weapons in the puppets hands too. He would make them when he would have finished with the joints. Sanmaru took the another hand and made the same that he had done for the another hand. Sanmaru were proud of this what he had done already. He also replaced the whole hands joints, making the hand little harder to broke. You know, if the joint of your hand (One of the largest, in the center.) brokes its almost impossible to repair. But back to the thread. Sanmaru added the wooden part to the another hand, too. Sanmaru wanted that the Feitan, or Taka, would be able to use Feitans original techniques, and that was the reason for adding chakra around the body. Sanmaru went for the legs, he took the bones off, replaced them with wood. Sanmaru had a special style. He were making a scales of bones for extra defense. He covered the wooden parts, like replaced bones, with thin bone scales. Sanmaru replaced the knee with bigger wooden ball. It were perfect. The "knee" were moving perfectly, like arms of the marionet. Sanmaru replaced also the feet. Legs were a place that Sanmaru didnt want to attach any weapons. Yet. He also added little of the chakra that he had insert inside of the body, to leg. When he had done that, he went to the another leg. He made the same. Sanmaru sew the legs and secured the body. He wanted to have a little rest. He hid the marionet making place. He went to sleep. Only thing that he did remember before he fall asleep were the goal of his. Perfect Marionet.

Day Two.

Sanmaru had woke up a hour ago. He were in a pretty good mood right now. He went to the body again. He had done arms, chest and legs. Remaining places were stomach, neck, back and head. Then it would be time for adding weapons. Sanmaru cut the stomach wide open, took the organisms away and put little chakra inside it. These were pretty difficult place to make, because there would be alot of wood to need. Sanmaru had to do about one or two centimetres long wood pieces for getting the stomach to work, actually. He made them in one hour. He put them in their places, glueing them with chakra. When they were together, Sanmaru made something jelly-like glue, and put it in those pieces. It were little like joints. It were flexible, so the body would be able to crouch. The stomach were done, and Sanmaru moved to neck. He opened it carefully. This were pretty important place in making a Marionet. Sanmaru removed the adam's apple. He made the parts of neck like he made the stomach. Feitans body were full of wood and thin bone scales. Sanmaru put his hand in the head of Feitan. This would remove Feitan from the world. Sanmaru removed the chin. This were the part he didnt like. He had to remove all of the teeths and the gums. When he had done that, he replaced the mouth with wooden like mouth, that would open like all of the puppets mouth does. He cut the cheeks open and made the mouth flexible, able to generate chakra from there, for like jutsus that reguire mouth. Or just for talking. Mouth were done now. Sanmaru moved for the eyes. Sanmaru made the eyes to look a like. They were the real eyes, actually. Sanmaru just used a lil bit chakra to keep them on. They were only original part on the body. The skin had been replaced with wood and bones, and so were the flesh. Sanmaru were almost done now. He opened the skull. He carefully removed the brains and put them aside. He made the same thing that he had made for the chest. He put some of his chakra inside there. Sanmaru removed the organisms inside head, expect eyes. He put wooden to cover the head. And again, the bone scale. There were only over 100 bones left.. Sanmaru had done the body part now. Its time for weapons now.

Part 2, Creating the killing machine.

Sanmaru opened the arm again. He had already a plan, about what he would do. He went to the bone table, took one of the biggest bones and made a thirty-centimetres long blade from it. It were sharp as kunai, or katana. The width of it were about six-centimetres. Sanmaru hid it in the arm. When he would want it would come out from there, little like some assassins had in the middle age. This were just pretty much bigger one. He made it on the right hand. Sanmaru tried how it would work; It worked perfectly. There were a self created lock that would open only if Sanmaru would want it to do so. It were a mechanism of wooden and bones: When the hand moves in right direction, it would come out. Sanmaru sew it and went for the another arm. He made the same thing. The hands were armed now. Sanmaru went to the head. He opened the mouth of his Marionet, and took little wooden from the table. He took a four-centimetres width bone. It were like a long, straight spike. He put it on the palate. He made a hole in the center of it. He put same like bone inside of it, expect this one were three-centimetres width. Hole on it, another bone: This time two-centimetres width. Last one but not the least one.. One-centimetres width. They were all having holes so they would go in a really small space, hiding it. It would be a surprise for enemy when he saws it. Sanmaru went for the chest now. He didnt know what to build for first. Then he get an idea. He made a mechanism that would put ribs out when the enemy gets too close. He put them on their real places, only changing the way the would go. So if the enemy gets too close, Taka is able to stab its ribs through of the enemy. He made same like system in the back of Taka. So when Sanmaru activates this system, Taka becames a little like hedgehog. The spikes of this "hedgehog" is just little more dangerous.. Sanmaru went for the legs. He wanted to add one thing on them. He put a extra bone scales to there. He put few of thems in that position, that if Taka hits some one with them, it will make bad scars on the area, it has hit. They were sharp. Sanmaru hid them with extra wood and when the time is right, they can be used as a weapon. Normally they work as extra defense as well. Sanmaru left few bones for later upgrading. He were finished with this one now, too. He put the bones aside, hiding them well for intruders. He were done with this part now, too. The next part were only decorations for the puppet. It would not be long but still, they got to be personal, you know?

Part 3, Making it kewl.

Sanmaru wanted to make few "cool things" on it. Sanmaru took the puppet for outside, near to the lake. He washed the scars, tooking blood away from it. He also secured the parts that were easiest to see. He put little more cloth on the suit. He also dryed the wood to little darker. It were darker than normal and clean! Sanmaru took a cleaning swim, too. He were covered with blood, and bone fragments. He had some own scars, too. Example, when he had been doing the blades for arms, he got over five scars. The water were warm. Sanmaru took a long "bath". He closed his eyes for a while and after about ten minutes, he get off from the water. He dried himself. He put the clothes on and went back to the body, tooking a wood fragment from the ground and little grass. He combined them to make a brush. Sanmaru were next to the body now. This part would not be long but still, lets tell about it. Sanmaru took a wood fragment, or brush that he had made, from the table. He draw few kabuki like decorations on Takas face. He also wanted to make a clothing for it. He took the Feitans clothing off. He made it lighter, so Taka would be faster. Sanmaru dyed the hair of Takas black, and put the clothes on. He changed the blue, to darker. Sanmaru were proud of his first puppet. He were happy when it did succeed with first try. It would not be nice to destroy such a good body. Sanmaru continued the decoration making. The Marionet. It were dark blue, almost black actually, Marionet now. Sanmaru made a mark that he would make to all of his Marionets. He also added the teeths back to mouth, giving little more defence for lips. They were not defended with such a defense as everything else. Sanmaru also made a cape that would hide Taka for sudden strikes. The cape were black, hiding the body of Taka. It had a hood also. It hid the weapons too. Dark Angel with a Scythe on her right hand and cross on left hand. Last thing to do would be the controlling of it. It will not be easy.

Part 4, Giving a life to my Marionet.

Sanmaru took the Marionet, stepping outside. The first thing to do would be connecting the chakra lines. It were harder than it heards. Sanmaru would have to make several chakra lines to connect every single part. He actually had few tactics how to do that but lets talk about them later. Sanmaru tried to concentrate a little chakra first. When he had done that he tried to connect the lines. Sanmaru were standing about four metres ago from Marionet. He tried to connect them, and for first glance, it were like he would have done that. But in the real life. He failed. The Chakra had blew away and chakra had burn Sanmarus finger tips. He had been trying too much. He tried again. This time there were a good amount of chakra. Sanmaru tried to connect the chakra strings, failing. Again. Then he tried once more. This time there were a perfect amount of chakra. Sanmaru tried to connect the Chakra with the puppet. Sanmaru had fail.. One time more. Three failures in a row. Sanmaru were thinking about the reason. He knew what were wrong: He had been doing the Marionet for a whole day. It really takes all of the strength away. Sanmaru were almost asleep and tried to keep awake. He went to the tent, hiding the Taka again. He fall asleep as fast as possible. Smiling.
when he had wake up, he took his sandvich.. Like every morning, day, or evening. He loved sanviches.. But back to the topic again. The day were beatiful again, this time there were not even clouds on the sky. Little wind in air and not even a piece of cloud in Sanmarus sight. He started the day with running a little lap around the wood.. Six kilometres. Sanmaru went to the place where he had hid the Taka. It seemed like no-one would even saw it. Sanmaru took it with him to the training place and when Sanmaru were ready to try Marionet controlling again. First he made little chakra on his finger tips. Then he tried it. He saw when the chakra started to gain length and just before they touched the Marionet, they disappeared. Poof. They were gone. Sanmaru knew that he would not do it at his first try and gave it another try. He made the same as last time. Sanmarus face were full of hope. It worked. The chakra lines were in Taka now. Sanmaru tried to raise it on two feets. He were excited about what would happen. Taka stood up. Sanmaru were happy about this. He tried to raise right arm. It raised. He made walked few hundred metres with it. Then he wanted to test the weapons of his Marionet. He made the weapons of arms come out. He tried to cut one of the remains of his earlier training puppets. He used the Marionet to cut one of those head off. It were perfect. The day, Marionet, everything. Sanmaru thought how to carry the Marionet with him. He knew what to do. He prepared a "ceremony". For what? Summoning. Sanmaru would summon the Marionet to him always when he needs it. He made few applies on the back of Marionet. They would disappear in the first fight or even earlier, but it were needed for Summoning. When they have been drawed once, it will always be same. Sanmaru took Feitans blood, and his own. He made a mark on the back of Taka. This werent normal Summoning. This were only like those scroll ones. Sanmaru would have to use the same hand always. He took the smallest of his rock knives and made symbols in his right arm. He were now able to summon the Marionet. He still wanted to try. The scroll were replaced with arm. Sanmaru put chakra on the symbols, so even the arm would blew up, the summoning would still work.. When Sanmaru had made the symbols on his left arm. Sanmaru hid those symbols under his bandages. He were done. His first puppet ever. And he were able to control it like normal Marionet user. He tried one thing also. He tried to re-place the Chakra lines as fast as possible. So if the Chakra lines are destroyed he would be able to reconnect them. Sanmaru were done. He cleaned the place. He hid the bones for later use. He were now done. He went back to the Amegakure.
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